hey guys this is my 1st tab so please email me n tell me wat u think
this follows closer 2 the original version with a few things i've added, its almost 
in semi quavers

I-21-20-19-18-17-16-15-14-13-12-11-10----|I
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I-9-8-7-6-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2----------|I
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I-5-4-3-2--------------------------|I
I---------8-7-6-5-6-5-4-3----------|I
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I--2----|I
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I--0----|I


I-----------------------------------I---|  x2
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I-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2-------|I
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I-9-8-7-6-7-6-5-4--9-8-7-6-7-6-5-4---|I
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I-21-20-19-18-19-18-17-16-21-20-19-18-19-18-17-16-------|I
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 (play the notes while sliding your finger down the fretboard)
I-21/0-------------------------------|I
I-----4-3-2-1-0----------------------|I
I---------------4-3-2-1-0------------|I
I-------------------------4-3-2-1-0--|I

I-------------------------------0/21--|I
I---------------------0-1-2-3-4-------|I
I-----------0-1-2-3-4-----------------|I
I-0-1-2-3-4---------------------------|I

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I-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2----|I
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I-7-6-5-4--8-7-6-7-6-5-4--4-5-6-I--| x2
I---------7--------------7---------|I

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I-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2-3-4-5-6-7-6-5-4----|I
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I-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2-3-4-5-6-7----------|I
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I-7-6-5-4--8-7-6-7-6-5-4--4-5-6-I--| x2
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I-7-6-5-4-5-4-3-2-3-4-5-6-7-6-5-4-I--| x2
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I-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-I--| x2
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I-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6----|I
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I-7-8-9-10-11-10-9-8-7-8-9-10-11-10-9-8----|I
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I-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-I--| x2
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I-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6----|I
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I-7-8-9-10-11-10-9-8-7-8-9-10-11-10-9-8----|I
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I-7-6-5-4--8-7-6-7-6-5-4--4-5-6-I--| x2
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 then u can end it however you want but i usualy do this

I-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-7-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-8-I--| x2
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I-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6-7-8-7-6----|I
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I-8-9-8-7-9-10-9-8-10-11-10-9-11-12-11-10----|I
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I-12-13-12-11-13-14-13-12-14-15-14-13-15-16-15-14-----|I
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I-16-17-16-15-17-18-17-16-18-19-18-17-19-20-19-18-----|I
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(play the notes while sliding your finger down the fretboard)
I-20-21/0--------------------------------|I
I---------4-3-2-1-0----------------------|I
I-------------------4-3-2-1-0------------|I
I-----------------------------4-3-2-1-0--|I

I-------------------------------0/21--|I
I---------------------0-1-2-3-4-------|I
I-----------0-1-2-3-4-----------------|I
I-0-1-2-3-4---------------------------|I