Grey Flap

My first Tab ever! I think it´s pretty correct, please tell me if it´s not. Love
Tune down to C# (1.5 steps down) It´s not complete (The part where Val sings is missing), but
improve!

Any notes or corrections? *

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time never was as they are for me
im happiest in a world full over error
time breaks my heart chnaged my soul again this time my friend
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excuse im wrong
C#5          E5

but i need some encouraging
      B5          F#5

thank you for being so bold
E5            F#5        C#5/E5