Drop D tuning

This song took a while to work out and I'm not entirely sure I got most of it
correct, but I couldn't find a version for it here on UG so if anyone can build
upon it, feel free.  Oh, and please leave corrections if you have any, thanks.

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|--------------------------------------------
|-----2-2-2-2-----5-5-5-5-----7-7-7-7-----10-
|-0-0-2-2-2-2-0-0-5-5-5-5-0-0-7-7-7-7-0-0-10-
|-0-0-2-2-2-2-0-0-5-5-5-5-0-0-7-7-7-7-0-0-10-
 x4

|------------------------------------------------
|------------------------------------------------
|------------------------------------------------
|---------2-----------5-----------7-----------10-
|---------2-----------5-----------7-----------10-
|-0-0-0-0-2---0-0-0-0-5---0-0-0-0-7---0-0-0-0-10-
 x4

repeat both parts again then into the chorus..

Chorus
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------
|----------------------------------------------------------------------------
|-10-----------------------12-----10-----9-----------------------------------
|-10-----------------------12-----10-----9-----------------------------------
|-10-----------------------12-----10-----9-----------------------------------
 just go, go, back to your bright lights, you made promises you couldn't keep,

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----10------------------------------------12--10--9------------------------------------------
----10------------------------------------12--10--9------------------------------------------
----10------------------------------------12--10--9------------------------------------------
I'm sick of your breath don't want it you know, just keep your mouth shut you got
no one to grow

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----10------------------------------------12----------------------------------------14-
----10------------------------------------12----------------------------------------14-
----10------------------------------------12----------------------------------------14-
you celebrate things, you celebrate things, forget about me just desecrate everything

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--------------------12---------9-|
--------------------12---------9-|
--------------------12---------9-|
oh you messed it up good.....

in the chorus a couple of times there's a second guitar playing octaves around
|--------
|--------
|-12--11-
|-x---x--
|-10--9--
|-------- heard mainly at the end of a lyric line written above

repeat all from verse

|----------
|--7--5--3-
|--7--6--4-
|----------
|----------
|----------

Outro
|----------------------------------------------------
|----------------------------------------------------
|-----9-9-9-9-----12-12-12-12-----14-14-14-14-----17-
|-----9-9-9-9-----12-12-12-12-----14-14-14-14-----17-
|-----7-7-7-7-----10-10-10-10-----12-12-12-12-----15-
|-0-0---------0-0-------------0-0-------------0-0----

any questions (or corrections)? *