album:this war will last forever

i heard and its really cool to play.
I have only been able to do one guitar, but if you could help me out, i would be very happy.
This took me absolutely hours to tab out because its really hard, and im only 14 and im 
to tabbing songs by aiden and stuff so please dont be too harsh!
I think its mostly perfect
Please rate and comment

drop d tuning

INTRO
|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------------| X4
|-000-8-6-8-000-6-4-6-000-9-8-9-000-6-8-6--|
|-000-------000-------000-------000--------|
|-000-------000-------000-------000--------|


PRE-VERSE
|-----------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------|
|------------15---------15-16-15~--15-16-18-16~--15----15~--|
|-16~--16-18----18~--18----------------------------18-------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------|

|-----------------------------------------------------|
|-15-16-18-16~--16-18-20-18~--20-18-16-----16---------|
|--------------------------------------20-----20-18~--|
|-----------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------|


VERSE
|--------------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------| X4
|-8---8-9-11-9-8-----11-9-8-----------------9------------------|
|----------------11---------11~----11-11-11-----8h9h11-9h9h11--|
|--------------------------------------------------------------|


POST-VERSE
|------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------|
|------------------------------------|
|-8~--6~--4~--3-6-8~--6~--4~--3-6-8--|
|-8~--6~--4~--3-6-8~--6~--4~--3-6-8--|
|-8~--6~--4~--3-6-8~--6~--4~--3-6-8--|


PRE-CHORUS                                           \
|--------------------------------------------------| ------- \
|--------------------------------------------------|  ------ \
|--------------------------------------------------|   ----- \
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888-6h8h6-----|    ---- \
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888-------9-8-|     --- \
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888-----------|      -- \
                                                           / x2
|----------------------------------------20~-------------- \           /
|--------------------------------------------------------- \          /
|--------------------------------------------------------- \         /
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888------------------ \        /
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888------------------ \       /
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888------------------ \      /


CHORUS                                      \
|--------------------------------------|    ------- \
|--------------------------------------|     ------ \
|--------------------------------------| x2   ----- \
|--------------------------------------|       ---- \
|-9p8p6-11p9p8-13p11p9-11p9p8-9p8p6p4--|        --- \
|--------------------------------------|         -- \
                                                  / x2
|------------------------------------------------ \              /
|------------------------------------------------ \             /
|---------------------------------| x2----------- \         /
|------------------------------------------------ \           /
|-7p6p4-9p8p6-11p9p7-9p8p6-7p6p4----------------- \          /
|------------------------------------------------ \         /


POST-CHORUS
|---------------------------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------------------------------| x2
|----------------999------------------------------999-88--|
|-999111111131313---13131111------1313131111--------------|
|---------------------------131313----------111111--------|


VERSE
|-----------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------| x4
|-8---8-9-11-9-8-----11-9-8-----------------9-8--------------8----|
|----------------11---------11~----11-11-11-----8h9h11-9-9h11-11--|
|-----------------------------------------------------------------|


PRE-CHORUS
|--------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------6h8h6-----|
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888-------9-8-|
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888-----------|
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888-----------|

|----------------------------------------20~--|
|---------------------------------------------|
|---------------------------------------------|
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888------|
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888------|
|-666-888-666-888-66-66--666-888-666-888------|


CHORUS                                      \
|--------------------------------------|    ------- \
|--------------------------------------|     ------ \
|--------------------------------------| x2   ----- \
|--------------------------------------|       ---- \
|-9p8p6-11p9p8-13p11p9-11p9p8-9p8p6p4--|        --- \
|--------------------------------------|         -- \
                                                  / x2
|------------------------------------------------ \              /
|------------------------------------------------ \             /
|---------------------------------| x2----------- \         /
|------------------------------------------------ \           /
|-7p6p4-9p8p6-11p9p7-9p8p6-7p6p4----------------- \          /
|------------------------------------------------ \         /


POST-CHORUS
|--------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------| x4
|----------------999------------------------------99988--|
|-999111111131313---13131111------1313131111-------------|
|---------------------------131313----------111111-------|


PRE-END
|--------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------8-6-8--| X6
|-000-8-6-8-000-6-4-6-000-8-6-8-9-8-9--------|
|-000-------000-------000--------------------|
|-000-------000-------000--------------------|


END
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|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------8-6-8-------------|
|-000-000-000-8-6-8-9-8-9-------000-000-00--|
|-000-000-000-------------------000-000-00--|
|-000-000-000-------------------000-000-00--|


enjoy...